Day 2 Tuesday June 5th 2007
New Video, new Facts, and Mystery Man!
Christine presents some new fact based clues you have to decode.
You Meet Grant Tenbrook, Sonia Haswell, and Detective Roger
Kinlan. A mystery man shouts a few things and runs off.
The police fail to snag the guy...I find that hard to believe, I'd
have nailed him for questioning ASAP, and at least detained him
long enough to get ID and a statement out of him. He knows something,
and if he doesn't he still needs to be questioned, and eliminated.
Sonia Haswell, who worked closely with andrew is cut off from saying anything
by the man, and in the confusion makes no real statement. Deliberate attempt
to silence her? She needs to be questioned.
Why was Andrew 3 miles from home on the day he was kidnapped?
Why does Andrew shake his head No, no, no when The kidnapper demands payment
in the video? Doesn't the kidnapped review his own video, or is he too stupid?
If he's that stupid, who's calling the shots? If you see a lady video taping her dog, do you
go on with your kidnapping, or do you wait for a better opportunity. Or do you want
publicity! Was this Staged! If so Why?
See ya Tomorrow for Day 3
Doctorslime
P.S. Hey the actors are doing a fine job, I feel genuinely sorry for Christine, but she could shed a tear. Grant Tenbrook I don't like (good job!), and your appeal to Andrew has the right ring of being disingenuine to it to make you seem a shade guilty(good job) Sonia too soon to tell about your characters potential, Max I know your a kid, but the spelling is weird and I'd think you'd show a bit more emotion, maybe even start to run after that strange guy. Det Roger hmm you could stand to be a bit more forceful, you had the professional bit down well though.
My 2cents.
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